As I’m standing naked...
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Topic: As I’m standing naked...
Posted By: Dazed
Subject: As I’m standing naked...
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 3:41pm
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...on the bow
of the boat that's afloat only in the here and now, I ask, is anything worth finding, worth staying for, or binding? Or should I sail away into the morrow, Excited, without sorrow, at the possibilities before me. |
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Posted By: MetallicaESPa5
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 3:42pm
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EDIT: Now that i have realized that it is a poem, good job. I used to write. ------------- 
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Posted By: Glassjaw
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 3:43pm
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I got out my hand lube for nothing. Nice though. I should hook you all up with my 1337 poetry skillsss sometime. ------------- |
Posted By: -ProDigY-
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 3:45pm
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Posted By: .Ryan
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 3:47pm
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Nice....I too and a poet at heart...I just need the proper inspiration.
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Posted By: tippmanplay07
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 3:51pm
| hmmmmmm...... |
Posted By: Multi-Colored J
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 3:52pm
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Better than the usual crap posts. Finally, some insightful and deep thinking. ------------- X |
Posted By: Dazed
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 3:52pm
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Freestyle, Prod. The 'New Topic' window is my scratch pad.
In other words, yes, I do that sometimes. Odd(and bad) rhymes, strange short stories, and other tidbits and clips. I thought you all needed stirred up today. Especially the finals crowd, they need something to laugh at. And perhaps join in with, as personally, I always found that test time and route memorization was off-set well by a good novel or creative jaunt when stress was high. |
Posted By: -ProDigY-
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 4:11pm
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I give it an enthusiastic two thumbs up. -------------
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Posted By: boomstick
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 4:17pm
Agreed. ------------- YONK~!~ |
Multi-Colored J wrote:Posted By: Dazed
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 4:25pm
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She takes the money from her purse,
and pays the man behind the counter. Gets her bag, and wanders out the door. She gets to the apartment, Sits down in the kitchen, And waits for the stove to warm. And the children are calling her home. Wondering again if they'll see her tonight. Not understanding why they're goin hungry. Falling and failing, her children were wailing, For the mother they could not find. Try as they may, no one would tell them She wasn't coming back this time. If they only knew, the needle was falling. If they only knew, the angels were calling. Calling, calling, calling her away. -Edit-I'm adding a little more. I'll get it closer to finished, then bump this, as if anyone cares. |
Posted By: shiftykyle101
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 5:01pm
pretty good. deep stuff. 
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Posted By: ConfusedPainter
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 5:27pm
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*ahem* "Beans beans, they're good for your heart..." |
Posted By: quizl
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 5:33pm
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here i sit, broken hearted,
tried to s h i t, but only farted. ------------- MEJOR QUE |
Posted By: shiftykyle101
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 5:40pm
| once there was a man named bill, who swallowed an atomic pill. his **edited** eroded, his **edited** exploded and he found his **edited** in brazil. |
Posted By: tippy_182
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 5:42pm
I like that better than the first (not that the first wasn't good). ------------- 
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Posted By: A-5 bunkerking
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 6:14pm
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some come here to **edited** and stink, others come here to sit and think. well i come here to scratch my balls, and read the writing on the walls.
anywho, dazed, great poems that really takes some talent. great work. ever thought of getting some published? |
Posted By: evil_fingers
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 6:19pm
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Wasted a dime oh what the hell I just sat here and enjoyed the smell
------------- Do not steal....the government hates competition! 
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Posted By: Hitman
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 6:35pm
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We just started our poetry unit in english today. Nice poems, keep on writing. ------------- |
Posted By: chs61224
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 6:54pm
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hmm.....why are you standing naked on the boat and how in the hell is the boat afloat?! ------------- All about the Snow. |
Posted By: Trogdor2
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 6:56pm
| I hate poems. I'm not saying that they're stupid or anything, but I don't get anything out of a whole bunch of words that rhyme. |
Posted By: Dazed
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 8:13pm
Make no mistake, none of it is good. Just the ramblings of a tired brain.
Never took any poetry in high schol, and only rudimentary in college. I do wis I had more, though.
Good questions. What do you think? |
Posted By: slacker guy
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 8:22pm
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Posted By: Darur
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 8:28pm
Hours later I took a chance, Tried to fart but <pooed> my pants ------------- Real Men play Tuba [IMG]http://img89.imageshack.us/img89/1859/newsmall6xz.jpg"> PH33R TEH 1337 Dwarf! http://www.tippmann.com/forum/wwf77a/log_off_user.asp" rel="nofollow - DONT CLICK ME!!1 |
Posted By: rootsradicals
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 8:30pm
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*sniff sniff* I smell another Forum Poetry Contest. How about it guys?
We already had a haiku contest, lets rock some free verse, or perhaps
rhymed pentameters.... Sorry....just another idea to lighten up T&O. ------------- WWBDD?  |
Posted By: Dazed
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 8:32pm
| Thats kind of where I was going with this, roots. Except, without the contest part. Just a place for random blurbs. |
Posted By: Ilovepaintball1
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 8:44pm
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Props to my Dogg BLAND |
Posted By: pb125
Date Posted: 13 December 2004 at 8:45pm
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-me ------------- 
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