need help about paintball team
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Topic: need help about paintball team
Posted By: paintfrk7755
Subject: need help about paintball team
Date Posted: 13 November 2006 at 12:05pm
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i need help setting up a team resume i need help can some one help me out fast and it is going to be sent a sponsor ------------- <no sig advertising please> |
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Posted By: lester98c
Date Posted: 13 November 2006 at 10:07pm
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umm right your acomplishments like places in tournaments, practice schedual, other sponcors, and give them reasons why they should be giving you stuff. if you don't have any results and are looking for anything about REDZ its not gonna happen. |
Posted By: procarbinefreak
Date Posted: 13 November 2006 at 10:36pm
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Posted By: choopie911
Date Posted: 13 November 2006 at 10:39pm
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Posted By: hybrid-sniper
Date Posted: 13 November 2006 at 11:26pm
| I get the feeling you've never played a tourney before. |
Posted By: paintfrk7755
Date Posted: 14 November 2006 at 10:02am
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i have played in a tiurney all of us have exept for one person and he is does not have hardly any money to inter them with the team ------------- <no sig advertising please> |
Posted By: paintfrk7755
Date Posted: 14 November 2006 at 5:04pm
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well we have one rite now and we were working on two more and i just have to make a resume and i just needed help
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Posted By: WGP guy2
Date Posted: 14 November 2006 at 6:00pm
| Mr. Paintfrk7755, I feel that it is my duty to inform you of the following things. The first letter of the first word in a sentance is always capitalized. I believe you were trying to use the adverb "right" (notice the gh without an e) to modify the adverb "now". The use of the conjuntion "and" to seperate more than two clauses is generally not accepeted, and is usually considered a run-on sentence. It would be best to seperate these clauses with periods. Lastly, to ensure easier reading and allow easier discernment of a sentence ending, please place a period at the end of each sentence. |
Posted By: hybrid-sniper
Date Posted: 14 November 2006 at 6:37pm
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Minor. ___ Generally, good sponsors come after tourneys. By after I mean you have to place or win. If he can't afford it, find someone else or get his buns behind a mower or something so he can pay his way. |
WGP guy2 wrote:Posted By: WGP guy2
Date Posted: 14 November 2006 at 6:44pm
Figures, that always happens when you try to correct someones English. However, it is accepted to use double apostrophies around letters such as I did. Furthermore, I placed the period in the right place. |
Posted By: hybrid-sniper
Date Posted: 14 November 2006 at 7:06pm
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I am surely misunderstanding but you didn't use quotations around the letters, so I had to put them there. Also, I am correct about the period in the quotation marks. Commas and periods go inside, but other marks do not. |
Posted By: WGP guy2
Date Posted: 14 November 2006 at 7:15pm
Haha, I interpreted your corrections as highlighting my mistakes. See, that means I realized my mistakes! |
Posted By: DeTrevni
Date Posted: 14 November 2006 at 7:17pm
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... Hybrid doesn't make mistakes... ------------- Evil Elvis: "Detrevni is definally like a hillbilly hippy from hell" 
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Posted By: paintfrk7755
Date Posted: 14 November 2006 at 8:26pm
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who cares for your help any more ------------- <no sig advertising please> |
Posted By: hybrid-sniper
Date Posted: 14 November 2006 at 8:28pm
| Poorly written. |
Posted By: paintfrk7755
Date Posted: 14 November 2006 at 8:34pm
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what can i do to make it better ------------- <no sig advertising please> |
Posted By: lester98c
Date Posted: 14 November 2006 at 8:42pm
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Go to school, pay attention in English class, and after you play and win tournaments try again. Don't expect to get anything major until your in the big time, if you look at the site in my sig and see the results, we turned that and a resume into alot of companys and got turned down by all of them. |
Posted By: procarbinefreak
Date Posted: 14 November 2006 at 8:46pm
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redz gives crappy sponsorships to everyone. try them. |
Posted By: paintfrk7755
Date Posted: 14 November 2006 at 8:48pm
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thank guys i think i will just us the forums at model98.com they seem to be better help than u a** holes ------------- <no sig advertising please> |
Posted By: hybrid-sniper
Date Posted: 14 November 2006 at 9:13pm
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Truth is the truth. That was not a good resume (werk on ur spling, dumees), and you don't have enough good experience to get any worthwhile sponsors yet. |
Posted By: paintfrk7755
Date Posted: 15 November 2006 at 7:53am
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ok well i was not done with it yet and i was just seeing how it was sooo far soo yeah i am going to stay with model98 they r a lot more better and help full than timmann **edited** ass help wich dont get u any where soo bibi ------------- <no sig advertising please> |
Posted By: Justice
Date Posted: 15 November 2006 at 3:28pm
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Try using FireFox for a web browser. It has built in spell check. Hybrid Sniper what makes you so qualified to say someone or some team does not have experience to get sponsorship? Our team is sponsored and we were less than a year old with no tourney experience. ------------- 
-JUSTICE http://www.myspace.com/outkastpaintball - Outkast Myspace |
Posted By: DeTrevni
Date Posted: 15 November 2006 at 4:25pm
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^^^ I'll assume your team shows signs of intelligence... ------------- Evil Elvis: "Detrevni is definally like a hillbilly hippy from hell"
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Posted By: lester98c
Date Posted: 15 November 2006 at 4:26pm
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just wondering justice whos the sponcors that you have? and to thread started we did offer you help and sugestions, your just to dumb to use them. |
Posted By: hybrid-sniper
Date Posted: 15 November 2006 at 6:20pm
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At least one member on your team is an adult, first of all. Without getting complete specifics from either side, I can't say with any certainty why I am being so critical of this kid's attempt. I guess my first problem is that it seems like the only reason they want a sponsor(s) is because one kid can't pay entry. That is not a good reason to seek sponsorship. Secondly, that resume was bad and full of fluff. Like I said, spelling counts. So does substance. Thirdly, it is news to me where a very green team with no experience can get good sponsors, ESPECIALLY from internet stores and whatnot. There would be a much better chance of getting halfway decent support from a local organization. But that's not who he is seeking out. |
Posted By: paintfrk7755
Date Posted: 15 November 2006 at 7:18pm
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yo thanks justice u r s big help bro ------------- <no sig advertising please> |
Posted By: estcstpnt
Date Posted: 18 November 2006 at 12:50am
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u guyz r n00bz at t3h spelin ------------- Thinking about it... |