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Topic: What scares you the most?
Posted By: DeTrevni
Subject: What scares you the most?
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 3:15am

Well, I like writing. I've been wanting to write a good horror story for a while now. Problem is, I think it's one of the most difficult genres to write about, at least for me. You need to capture the reader's imagination and fear, tie them together, and manipulate them to feel whatever you want them to.

So, background aside, I need a "monster" for the story I wish to write. Not so much in a literal sense, but I need a basis for the ground fear in the story. It can be psychological, supernatural or physical. I figured the best way to create said "monster" would be to ask the masses. So what would make you check over your shoulder? What would make you hesitate when walking into a dark hallway? Try not to be limited to the terms of human reality. I need beyond that. Basically, I need you to help me scare the crap out of you. Kind of contradictory I know. Consider it a literary experiment! :)

Thanks!



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Posted By: BARREL BREAK
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 3:20am
So, you're looking for a figurative bogeyman, right?

Because when I think real fear, I don't think of monsters, as it were.

That said, all insects and arachnids can be scary when done right.


Posted By: DeTrevni
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 3:26am
Well, that's the thing. I want to create a fear. A fear as a self-substantiating existence. It doesn't have to be limited to a physical being, it can be a curse, an invisible presence, a psychological terror, a haunting or, yes, the proverbial boogyman.

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Posted By: BARREL BREAK
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 3:28am
To me, the scariest things are the depths of our own minds. To lose control, let your grip slip slightly, to not be able to trust your senses, that is my ultimate fear.


Posted By: DeTrevni
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 3:31am

Ooo. Psychosis and paranoia. What's real and what's not? That would be a good one to work with. More so for a good reading story though. I don't know if that would relate too well with the reader.

I may do it just to say I did.



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Posted By: sporx
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 3:31am
i'm deathy afraid of things that move without legs. (snakes, worms)

and needles.

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Posted By: DeTrevni
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 3:36am

Story: The boogeyman snuck up behind the girl and dropped worms into her newly acquired red Hollister shirt!

Sporx: OMIGODOMIGODOMIGODOMIGOD!!!!!!!!

Sorry, one of those funny mental images.



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Posted By: Darur
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 4:09am
The classic horror archetype is always good, a monster you created or brought upon yourself.

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Posted By: pb125
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 4:12am
Reality is really al just a matter of perspective.

For all you know this could be made up.


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Posted By: DeTrevni
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 4:31am
That could actually be used with the psychosis and paranoia scenario.

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Posted By: *Stealth*
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 5:08am
Frog man is not real.

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Posted By: Hitman
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 7:28am
Faces looking in your windows from outside at night.

I think that anything that could actually happen to you is scary. Make monsters of every day men. Force them into consciousnesses they wish they never knew about. Drive an all-round good person to commit murder-suicide because he just can't take being walked over anymore.


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Posted By: Dye Playa
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 11:24am
i don't like the idea of killer ghosts. like if you a person, atleast i see you coming and can get ready for it-if your a ghost, i'm sitting on the crapper and you could  come at me with a bloody hatchet like through the door.

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Posted By: FlimFlam
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 11:28am
A giant Praying Mantis...  Those things creep me out

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Posted By: Ghost-Rider
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 11:31am
Originally posted by FlimFlam FlimFlam wrote:

A giant Praying Mantis...  Those things creep me out


they pinch to...i have lost a nice chunk of finger to one of them sons a beachs.


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Posted By: Rambino
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 11:31am

Interesting question.  But can there ever be a universal bogeyman?

Don't you just have to write about what scares you the most, and hope it scares other people as well?  Seems to me that writing about what scares other people would be even more difficult.



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Posted By: Skillet42565
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 11:41am
Blood sucking demons (lawyers)


Posted By: Dye Playa
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 11:42am
Originally posted by Skillet42565 Skillet42565 wrote:

Blood sucking demons (lawyers)

**hides under covers from rambs**


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Posted By: a5Tpp789
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 12:02pm
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Posted By: Da Hui
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 12:07pm
A series of violent murders in your community. Everybody is paranoid. You then find it that its yourself. Kinda like the green goblin in the spiderman movie. And you would be paranoid of being killed everynight. Thinking your seeing things.

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Posted By: SandMan
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 12:08pm
The most effective horror for me is that which is rooted in reality... Graphic descriptions of tortue, rape, and other such heinous, inhuman acts.

So if I were writing it, I'd probably go with something along the lines of Silence of the Lambs, 8MM, or Memento... Mind twisting and cruel, but very real.

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Posted By: Razgriz Ghost
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 12:26pm

De you ever read The Shining? There's your pyschosis and paranoia.

What scares me the most is losing control becuase of fear. I would hate to be unable to act becuase I was too afraid the shame would kill me. 



Posted By: Da Hui
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 12:42pm
Originally posted by SandMan SandMan wrote:

The most effective horror for me is that which is rooted in reality... Graphic descriptions of tortue, rape, and other such heinous, inhuman acts.
I think thats true for most people.


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Posted By: battlefreak
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 12:58pm
What is done in alot of horror stories is a horrible event (ie: murder, mass killing, ect.) happening in an isolated place a long time ago, Then switch to a current setting in which people who have nothing to do with it end up at the same place and are forced to find out what happend because of strange events occuring in the area. (or somthing like that, it's pretty classic but effective)

Also excuse grammer errors as I have to go now.

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Posted By: SandMan
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 1:00pm
Originally posted by Da Hui Da Hui wrote:


Originally posted by SandMan SandMan wrote:

The most effective horror for me is that which is rooted in reality... Graphic descriptions of tortue, rape, and other such heinous, inhuman acts.
I think thats true for most people.


Makes it even more effective, then.

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Posted By: Da Hui
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 1:02pm
Originally posted by SandMan SandMan wrote:

Originally posted by Da Hui Da Hui wrote:


Originally posted by SandMan SandMan wrote:

The most effective horror for me is that which is rooted in reality... Graphic descriptions of tortue, rape, and other such heinous, inhuman acts.
I think thats true for most people.


Makes it even more effective, then.
Agreed.


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Posted By: Da Hui
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 1:07pm
Also, you could write something about Captain Howdy. Demonic manifestations have always created a creepy feeling with general audiences. 

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Posted By: Styro Folme
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 1:07pm
In my opinion, to have an effective horror, someone important/good has to die in a very sad way, leaving others to mourn. 

As for a "bogeyman"  I will leave he forum to decide that.


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Posted By: Da Hui
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 1:13pm
Write something that plays off of both angels. Use the macarbe/satanic demonic imagery and combine it with human horror. Play off of the "feeling your being watched" or "what if god really existed" type things. 

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Posted By: JohnnyCanuck
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 5:18pm
Losing ones mind for whatever reason.  My granpa had dementia, during his lucid moments he was terrified of slipping back into dementia and you could see it in his eye -  it freaked me out.

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Posted By: sporx
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 9:44pm
Originally posted by SandMan SandMan wrote:

The most effective horror for me is that which is rooted in reality... Graphic descriptions of tortue, rape, and other such heinous, inhuman acts.

So if I were writing it, I'd probably go with something along the lines of Silence of the Lambs, 8MM, or Memento... Mind twisting and cruel, but very real.

sodomy is one of those words that just make you go...BAAH.

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Posted By: BARREL BREAK
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 9:53pm
Originally posted by sporx sporx wrote:

Originally posted by SandMan SandMan wrote:

The most effective horror for me is that which is rooted in reality... Graphic descriptions of tortue, rape, and other such heinous, inhuman acts.

So if I were writing it, I'd probably go with something along the lines of Silence of the Lambs, 8MM, or Memento... Mind twisting and cruel, but very real.

sodomy is one of those words that just make you go...BAAH.
Things tighten.


Posted By: GI JOES SON
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 9:55pm
getting the throat slit, like in that scene in die hard too when they're all friendly to the guy then he rips out the knife and kills him. crazy stuff


Posted By: stratoaxe
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 10:01pm

Originally posted by GI JOES SON GI JOES SON wrote:

getting the throat slit, like in that scene in die hard too when they're all friendly to the guy then he rips out the knife and kills him. crazy stuff

Did you see High Tension? Worst throat splitting scene in any movie.



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Posted By: Glassjaw
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 10:09pm
Originally posted by SandMan SandMan wrote:

The most effective horror for me is that which is rooted in reality... Graphic descriptions of tortue, rape, and other such heinous, inhuman acts.

So if I were writing it, I'd probably go with something along the lines of Silence of the Lambs, 8MM, or Memento... Mind twisting and cruel, but very real.


Think of:

Se7en, Saw, Hostel


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Posted By: Evil Elvis
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 10:26pm
One of the craziest movies I seen to date is Jacobs Ladder. I think that Blur of real and sureal is by far scarier. With more Hostel and Saw movies people become used to that kinda stuff.

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Posted By: SandMan
Date Posted: 12 July 2007 at 11:20pm
Sounds like my kinda movie.

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Posted By: Thor
Date Posted: 13 July 2007 at 1:36pm
Anything that disfigures the human form/mind into becoming inherently evil.

Like Texas chainsaw massacre, hills have eyes, jason series.

Things like that freak me out because you know any mercy would be gone.

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Posted By: Da Hui
Date Posted: 13 July 2007 at 1:40pm
Originally posted by sporx sporx wrote:

Originally posted by SandMan SandMan wrote:

The most effective horror for me is that which is rooted in reality... Graphic descriptions of tortue, rape, and other such heinous, inhuman acts.

So if I were writing it, I'd probably go with something along the lines of Silence of the Lambs, 8MM, or Memento... Mind twisting and cruel, but very real.

sodomy is one of those words that just make you go...BAAH.





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Posted By: BooksAndLeaves
Date Posted: 13 July 2007 at 2:40pm
seven was a good movie

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Posted By: The American
Date Posted: 13 July 2007 at 3:25pm
Sometimes around Halloween at like Haunted Houses and what not, there will be guys on stilts walking around with the Grim Reaper outfit on.  Anything tall like that always freaked me out.

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Posted By: Dom
Date Posted: 13 July 2007 at 4:29pm
Originally posted by DeTrevni DeTrevni wrote:

Story: The boogeyman snuck up behind the girl and dropped worms into her newly acquired red Hollister shirt!

Sporx: OMIGODOMIGODOMIGODOMIGOD!!!!!!!!

Sorry, one of those funny mental images.



I love you too.


Posted By: Evil Elvis
Date Posted: 13 July 2007 at 4:38pm
Oh I forgot what also scares the crap outta me.

Movies with Crazy Cannibal Hillbilies. Like Wrong Turn and Deliverance. I havent been East of the Shore since.

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Posted By: DeTrevni
Date Posted: 14 July 2007 at 3:05am
Originally posted by Dom Dom wrote:

Originally posted by DeTrevni DeTrevni wrote:

Story: The boogeyman snuck up behind the girl and dropped worms into her newly acquired red Hollister shirt!

Sporx: OMIGODOMIGODOMIGODOMIGOD!!!!!!!!

Sorry, one of those funny mental images.



I love you too.

Buah! He's cracked the subliminal messages!

But srsly, I've got this cool idea. We should have like a horror story-off or something. Like, we have a month to come up with a good horror story, and get the forum to vote on which is the best. Anyone up?



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Posted By: DBibeau855
Date Posted: 14 July 2007 at 3:20am
Suffocating

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Posted By: DsXz
Date Posted: 14 July 2007 at 6:17am
Originally posted by Skillet42565 Skillet42565 wrote:

Blood sucking demons (<<edited>>)
fixed *edit* but now that i think about it you were half way right the first time




It's not OK to quote someone and alter the quote to add a racist statement. And you even edited and could had fixed it. Be carefull of what you type in the future.

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Posted By: jordanpischke
Date Posted: 14 July 2007 at 2:22pm
Stuff like silent hill and the exorcist. It always freaks me out.

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Posted By: Da Hui
Date Posted: 14 July 2007 at 4:14pm
Originally posted by DeTrevni DeTrevni wrote:

Originally posted by Dom Dom wrote:

Originally posted by DeTrevni DeTrevni wrote:

Story: The boogeyman snuck up behind the girl and dropped worms into her newly acquired red Hollister shirt!

Sporx: OMIGODOMIGODOMIGODOMIGOD!!!!!!!!

Sorry, one of those funny mental images.



I love you too.

Buah! He's cracked the subliminal messages!

But srsly, I've got this cool idea. We should have like a horror story-off or something. Like, we have a month to come up with a good horror story, and get the forum to vote on which is the best. Anyone up?

Hell, if we get some more forumers in, I'll write a horror story for yall.


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Date Posted: 14 July 2007 at 9:01pm
Hillary  Clinton.

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Posted By: DeTrevni
Date Posted: 15 July 2007 at 1:03am
Originally posted by Da Hui Da Hui wrote:

Originally posted by DeTrevni DeTrevni wrote:

Originally posted by Dom Dom wrote:

Originally posted by DeTrevni DeTrevni wrote:

Story: The boogeyman snuck up behind the girl and dropped worms into her newly acquired red Hollister shirt!

Sporx: OMIGODOMIGODOMIGODOMIGOD!!!!!!!!

Sorry, one of those funny mental images.



I love you too.

Buah! He's cracked the subliminal messages!

But srsly, I've got this cool idea. We should have like a horror story-off or something. Like, we have a month to come up with a good horror story, and get the forum to vote on which is the best. Anyone up?

Hell, if we get some more forumers in, I'll write a horror story for yall.
Srsly. People should join in.

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Posted By: Razgriz Ghost
Date Posted: 15 July 2007 at 4:22pm
alright de I'll join.


Posted By: DeTrevni
Date Posted: 15 July 2007 at 4:28pm

So we gots 3?

NEED S'MORE!



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Posted By: Da Hui
Date Posted: 15 July 2007 at 4:30pm
I wonder of Tae would be interested. Seeing as he is such a good writer and all.

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Posted By: DeTrevni
Date Posted: 15 July 2007 at 4:31pm

Or Rambino. Or Brave Coward.

There's a lot of writing talent here. I figured there would be more interest in a "write-off."



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